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Artificial Intelligence
Definitely artificial, definitely not intelligent.


The Savage Editorbot
When I set AI loose as an editor of my writing, the bot immediately gave me examples of its limitations. I asked an LLM to edit the first chapter of my book, a comic novel written from the first-person perspective of its protagonist. I asked the bot to keep the voice and tone, but aside from that, I let it decide the extent of editing required. The first red flag popped up when the bot described what it intended to do. It suggested a line edit, with the goal of “tightenin

Blue Room Works LLC
Jun 13 min read


AI and the Great American Novel
I had an argument with AI this morning about its writing capabilities. It was a frustrating exchange, but I think that, in the end, I won. The fight started when I asked a popular LLM chatbot to imagine a fantasy novel using the 7-point story structure and write the story’s first and last paragraphs. My request was in bad faith because I knew the bot couldn’t write a novel. However, I wanted to see how it responded to the prompt. I wanted to test the model’s ability to conc

Blue Room Works LLC
May 275 min read
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